When bad dialogue happpens to good plot
I can't write character dialogue for crap.
I'll admit it.
MY WRITING SKILLS ARE TERRIBLE.
MY DIALOGUE IS WORSE THAN THAT OF STAR WARS EPISODE III
Th dialogue for this is clever in such a way that it makes you chuckle. It leads you on, and than thrusts you into a different, yet funny, direction. Good work with this one