Third time's the charm
I ended up doing this comic 3 different times before I submitted it.
The first time was way too pointless and didn't really advance the plot at all, and the second time had poorly scripted dialogue that at the time seemed okay but afterwards looked kinda lame.
Third time seemed pretty good so I stuck with it.
The effects are good, I like what you've done with the custom characters and backgrounds, but I think the speech bubbles could be a bit better.
Yeah I'm aware of the speech bubble, or rather RECTANGLE problem.
I'm gonna stick with this for the rest of the chapter, and plan to change it next chapter.